c'est what ([info]cest_what) wrote,

3 Drabbles

I have written drabbles (ish) for [info]dorrie6's First Lines challenge. Hikaru no Go, xxxHolic and Harry Potter. All worksafe.


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Telekinesis (Hikaru no Go)

"Shindou, this is ridiculous," Touya says, shifting irritably on the other side of the goban.

"Shut up, it's not." Hikaru frowns, concentrating more fiercely.

"You are not going to move the stones with your mind."

Hikaru looks up, giving him a level glare. "Not on my own," he says. "Obviously."

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Hold Still (xxxHolic)

"Ugh. Is it gone?" Watanuki asked, propping himself up on his elbows, one of which was throbbing.

"Hold still," Yuuko said, her expression intent as she scanned his face.

Maru and Moro danced behind her, inappropriately delighted. "Hold still! Hold still!" they cried.

Watanuki flopped his head back, knocking it repeatedly against the smooth hardwood floor. "Ow. Ow. Ow." The store room was a dangerous place, but he'd never opened a writing case and been chased by a quill before. It was the most undignified thing that had ever happened to him. Except for maybe the cat ears thing.

"Ow," he said, knocking again.

"You're not holding still," Yuuko observed, her voice dark with amusement. Watanuki glared at her, and she ran careful fingers over his cheeks. Then she smiled, springing to her feet. "There! All gone."

Maru and Moro laughed and hugged each other. They didn't chorus "All gone!", which Watanuki should have realised was a warning bell.

Doumeki's expression only changed a little bit when Watanuki came out to find him waiting at the front of the shop.

"Suits you," he said.

"What?" Watanuki demanded. "No, whatever it is. Whatever Yuuko just drew on my face, get rid of it."

Doumeki actually bit his lip. Then he stepped closer, and touched Watanuki's cheek. His fingers were a feather over the skin.

He was ridiculously close, closer than he needed to be, and Watanuki suddenly couldn't breathe. Doumeki's eyes were dark and very serious. Watanuki's cheek under his fingertips felt shivery for some reason.

"There," Doumeki said, stepping back abruptly, taking the heat with him. Watanuki blinked. "It's gone."

It was only when Watanuki got home that he discovered that Doumeki hadn't rubbed out the cat whiskers inked over his cheeks after all.

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Baby Blue (Harry Potter)

It was Remus who brought him in, small and quiet with that hair.

Harry reached out, cautiously in case Remus said that he shouldn't, and touched a pale blue curl. The baby opened its mouth and yawned, graceless and tiny. There was a little spit bubble at the corner of its mouth.

"He's, um ... he's a Metamorphmagus, then?" Harry asked.

"It's not supposed to be hereditary," Hermione said, fascinated. And then, realising that this might not have been the expected reaction, "Professor, he's gorgeous, he really is." She frowned, biting on a thumbnail. "It must be the effect of having two shapeshifters as parents - that's a powerful mixture."

"Well, I'm glad that if he inherited shapeshifting from us, it was this variety," Remus said. He sounded as though he was trying to joke, but there was a hoarse, pained note in his voice that spoke of dreadful seriousness. He stroked the edge of Teddy's forehead, very gently, under the soft impossible hair. He looked up. "Do you want -?"

Hermione stepped forward, then bit her lip. "I'm not sure that I - I'm not very good with - with small things. Babies and things."

Ron was in the kitchen with Andromeda and Tonks, theoretically helping them put away the shopping they'd been doing when Harry and the others ran into them in Diagon Alley. By the sound of it he and Tonks were mainly clashing saucepans together and getting in Andromeda's way, rather than helping.

Remus passed Teddy to Harry, who held his breath, taking the slight weight. He looked down at the small face. Teddy made a wet, sucking noise, and blew another spit bubble.

Harry adjusted his arms, careful and awkward. He knew that if babies were really as breakable as they looked, he would never have lasted with the Dursleys. He'd been older than Teddy then, though. When he was this age, he was probably being passed to his godfather to be held too.

Teddy squirmed a bit and raised his arms, and Harry adjusted his arms again, tucking the baby more securely against his knee. Godson, he thought, trying the word out in his head.

It sounded nice.

It'll be different for you, he promised. He was embarrassed by how serious he felt, here in this peaceful, sunny scene with Tonks snorting with laughter in the other room. But ...

I'll make sure.

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Links to the original fics these were based on are here.
Tags: doumeki/watanuki, fic, ficletty things, gen, hikago, hp, slash, xxxholic

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  • 18 comments

[info]dorrie6

July 1 2008, 10:52:11 UTC 3 years ago

Oh, yay! I must find something to write!! :D

[info]blindmouse

July 1 2008, 10:57:48 UTC 3 years ago

Yay :-)

[info]knittedninja

July 1 2008, 17:50:31 UTC 3 years ago

Neat! I liked both, but especially the DouWata one. :wibble:

[info]cest_what

July 1 2008, 21:11:59 UTC 3 years ago

Thank you!

[info]wicked_liz

July 1 2008, 19:36:49 UTC 3 years ago

Both are love <3 The xxxHolic fandom needs more cute drabbles!

Poor Watanuki is destined to become a cat-boy, he cannot fight this XD

I'm still bitter with Rowling for her love of random & pointless death X/ Though I can understand why she would need Remus...T_T

[info]cest_what

July 1 2008, 21:16:37 UTC 3 years ago

Thank you! The xxxHolic fandom needs more of everything :-)

The only justification I could see for killing off Tonks and Remus would be if the epilogue had been about Harry being godfather to orphan Teddy, rather than about entirely random Potter children we'd never heard of before.

[info]pezzae

July 2 2008, 03:57:14 UTC 3 years ago

*sigh* That little snippet of family life was so sweet and so perfect. It made me hate the unnecessary deaths even more. Somebody needs to write more Remus-deals-with-having-a-son and Harry-deals-with-having-a-godson fic. (I don't suppose you could fit that into your enormous list of plotbunnies?)

[info]blindmouse

July 2 2008, 04:29:48 UTC 3 years ago

Thank you! I agree, there needs to be much more Teddy fic in general - I am entirely uninterested in the random Potters with the terrible names, by contrast, yet they get so much more fandom attention.

I don't suppose you could fit that into your enormous list of plotbunnies?

Lol. I think the critical mass of cute would kill me if I wrote much more kidfic in the next little while :-)

I don't suppose you feel like drabbling? You did say you used to write ... and a drabble is so small ...

[info]pezzae

February 7 2009, 05:03:42 UTC 3 years ago

The reason I stopped writing was that I am TERRIBLE at dialogue. I just can't seem to get it reading as vaguely realistic and unclunky. And that was frustrating and not fun, so. I'm happy to stick with reading other people who do it better :)

[info]parlophone

July 2 2008, 00:51:50 UTC 3 years ago

I loved the baby Teddy one, and I hope someone picks the line from Earthbound Spook!

[info]cest_what

July 2 2008, 01:34:06 UTC 3 years ago

Thank you! I'm on such a kidfic kick at the moment ... the cute is a bit embarrassing.

I hope someone picks the line from Earthbound Spook!

That would be awesome indeed. Although I kind of so badly want the 'sir' one to be Jeeves-and-Wooster fic that if nobody does it I might have to do it myself. Would that be lame?

[info]parlophone

July 2 2008, 19:04:26 UTC 3 years ago

No, it wouldn't, though it would be even more awesome if you made it Bunter and Lord Peter Wimsey :)

And now I've gone and read your Peanuts/TeniPuri.

[info]blindmouse

July 2 2008, 23:35:56 UTC 3 years ago

I actually don't know Bunter and Lord Peter Wimsey. I've heard the names a lot but ... no. I feel terribly ignorant.

And now I've gone and read your Peanuts/TeniPuri.

... I will get you to read real tenipuri fic eventually, I swear :D

[info]dorrie6

July 6 2008, 01:34:25 UTC 3 years ago

Finally a response to your challenge from me! The moon should have risen an hour ago (xxxHolic). Posted in my fic journal, mostly so I can, uh, continue to edit it. Heh.

[info]blindmouse

July 6 2008, 08:12:45 UTC 3 years ago

Ooh! Now that is cool :-) What a marvellous image. *Daydreams about xxxHolic final moment speculations.*

[info]dorrie6

July 6 2008, 13:43:37 UTC 3 years ago

:D I'm glad you liked it! Thank you! It was such a great first line to work with!

[info]ahria

November 28 2008, 07:39:04 UTC 3 years ago

I love the Donuts one. :D

[info]cest_what

November 28 2008, 07:44:34 UTC 3 years ago

Thank you!
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